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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey again:)

I enjoyed this chapter (obviosuly) and it was especially nice to to see the main character's personalities continuing to grow. I especially like Sirius and his blatant, obvious, not subtle at all. I dislike for Snape. I absolutely loved his comment: “Severus has been sort of nosy lately, hasn’t he?” he continued. “Hard for him not to be, with a nose like his, come to think of it." That line made me laugh and definitely seems like something Sirius would say!

Another part of this chapter that I liked was when Beth stood up for Mary - it was nice to see that even though she hangs out with four boys, her feminine side is definitely still in tact!

Lily and James got together! Yay! I'm definitely hoping to see a bit more of Lily in later chapters, as I haven't read much about her yet. I'm also finding myself wondering whether she and Beth will become friends...hmmm...

I love that there is this huge air of mystery surrounding each of your chapters (especially when it comes to Snape, who seems quite creepy) which means that I am desperate for more.

Nice job!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Oh, Sirius. :D His characterization in this book (and in the other two) was largely drawn from the way ToujoursPadfoot brilliantly writes him, and some credit must be given to her. I forgot about that nose comment until you mentioned it here, and it made me grin -- totally didn't remember I wrote that. He's got such spunk!

Beth's best friends may be boys, but she's definitely a girl, all-out crushes on a particular male specimen included. ;) And yes, James and Lily are still an item in this story! Their relationship obviously drives a lot of key events of the Marauder years, and this storyline carries us right to the end of 1981, so they'll pop up a lot, and although Beth has her boys, she and Lily will maintain something like friendship. Lily isn't as big a factor as James, mostly because, although this is a Marauders-era story, it's largely Beth and Snape's. But of course she'll make regular appearances throughout!

SO GLAD YOU FIND A MYSTERIOUS AIR HERE, TOO. ♥ Pardon the caps, but as someone who doesn't generally think I'm good at writing mysteries, that's an incredible boost!

Thank you for reviewing and saying such lovely things! ♥ Your reviews are just fabulous, and it means a lot to me to see someone enjoying the story thus far, as you are. :) Hope to see you back again before long!


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