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Review:KiwiOliver says:
KiwiOliver here with your RR:
I must say, this story was darn near perfect.
I loved every bit, from the quirks Alice had, to the mentioning of Augusta.
Your characters were something to be jealous of and your story flowed without a single hiccup!
Once I had started reading I found myself glues to the page, not daring to take my eyes off!
I defiantly enjoyed the Alice in Wonderland theme, with Mad Alice and various allusions, you did a great job there.
The balance between the backstory and action could not have been better, I enjoyed the action-y parts and learnt a lot about your amazing character without feeling like there was too much or too little of either!
I can't find any inconsistencies and I can't think of any CC.
I think the ending worked brilliantly, I particularly liked the part about Neville, it almost brought a tear to my eye!
Sorry if this isn't a long and detailed review pointing out lots of mistakes and criticisms. It's your fault for being so darn awesome.

Author's Response: Hi there! :) I'm so sorry for the delay in responding to your incredible review!

I'm so pleased and honoured that you liked the story, your kind words are really so lovely to hear. I'm glad you liked Alice, and the little details in the minor characters like Augusta. I really enjoyed imagining Alice's sphere of life and getting into her head to give her a personality.

Ah, I'm glad you liked the allusions and symbolism as well! Incorporating that was another of my favourite parts. I was a little worried about the flow and the balance with action and backstory, so knowing it came across well is great to hear. And that the part about Neville touched you emotionally, I just felt so bad for him! :(

Thank you for this wonderful review, I loved it! :)

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