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Review:AlexFan says:
Well then, that was certainly unexpected! I liked that it starts out with a memory and I think everyone just learned a whole lot about Rose and her feelings for Malfoy. Or at least where the story is going to end up going.

This was definitely a filler chapter and yes, the ending was kind of slow (the beginning though was oh my God!) the only thing that I have to point out is that there were a couple of grammatical errors throughout the chapter that I would suggest fixing.

Author's Response: Haha! Looks like you did beat me to it.
Ah well! Next time :P

I'm glad you liked the memory. I really loved writing that bit of the story. The rest was just to give more insight into the dynamic between them... I'm just using the first few chapters to set up some sort of a base.

I'll make sure to fix those errors.
Thanks again for this review :)
I'll be re-requesting soon. I'm sorry it took me a while to reply.

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