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Review:quixotic says:
This is for the Blue vs. Bronze Battle!

Dragon Pox is a very interesting thing to base a story upon. I never knew much about the epidemic, I guess that it gives a wide scope to write a story!

The prologue is great. I can clearly distinguish the ninety year old Diana from the twelve year old one just based on the language. That's one skill that I admire in a writer and hope to pick up in the future :)

Diana Potter is obviously some sort of relation to Harry. She couldn't be his grandmother, perhaps a grand aunt? Hmm.

The following chapter is beautifully written. I loved your description and the way the people talk. I especially liked the part about England getting everything from France. It was a bit hilarious.

You moved between three different ages in two chapters, pulling off the time transitions flawlessly. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: ♥ Thank you!

She's actually a bit more distantly related even than that - she's his grandfather's cousin. I wanted to write something about a distant relative of his who survives both wizarding wars, but I knew that part of the point of Harry was that he had no one on either side of his family. I figured that this was a good way to justify both.

I'm glad you liked it so much! I've been working on the next chapter - hopefully it will be up soon. :)


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