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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Here for the Ravenclaw review tag!

This is a really sweet and sad oneshot! I feel so awful for Snape, you describe his feelings of love and despair so well. I love the last line especially, it's very poetic.

I also like the structure of it, you manage to tell the story very well and it's so easy to understand the time that is passing, so kudos for that as it's not easy to do :)

The only criticism I have is that there's not more! I love Snape and Lily together, and I think it would be great if you wrote a novel with this subject matter.

Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! :)

I'm glad that you thought it was sad and described Snape's feelings accurately. I'm not very willing to delve into canon characters' emotions, so it's great to hear that I'm doing okay! :)

I'm also really excited that you liked the last line! That was the foundation of the whole story--it popped into my head late one night, and I built the story around it. :D

The reason that there isn't more of it is that I'm not too confident on my ability to write about Snape and Lily. Maybe one day in the far-off future? You're really sweet to say that, though! :)

Thanks so much for all of your lovely comments! :)

~UnluckyStar57


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