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Review:alicia and anne says:
I love that Harry is being sneaky! No wonder he's an Auror. He's so awesome isn't he? I love him!

You have really got Hermiones anxiety across really well, you've made it so believable and I feel so sorry for her. I hope you know just how many feelings you're making me feel with your brilliant story by the way! A lot!! It's good! :D

I'm glad that Scorpius is going to stick with the Weasley/Potter clan, they all need each other and protect each other.

Aww just when I think that Ron's love for Hermione can't get any more adorable, he makes a comment about liking carrying Hermione around. I have so many feelings right now! *HUGS THEM TIGHTLY*

Haha Harry is very immature sending that message during the match, he's so brilliant! I love him!

And Al is definitely right, Harry does have style!

Another brilliantly wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Being an Auror, as well as having known Dung and probably also Fred and George, definitely taught Harry a thing or two about sneaking around. He has the skills down.

I'm glad you liked the scene with Hermione. It wasn't much fun to write because I wouldn't wish what she's going through on anyone. But if you can feel a little of what she's feeling, I think I did a good job.

Scorpius is definitely going to stick with the family, if for no other reason than the fact that Rose would kill him if he didn't. In my mind, Al sort of adopted him while they were in school, then Rose cemented the deal.

Ron does fawn over her quite a bit, doesn't he? It's just in his nature, I think. Ron always struck me as being more like his mother than his father.

Being immature and having style definitely aren't mutually exclusive. Some of the most stylish people I know have an immature streak a mile wide. ;)

Can't wait to see what you think of the next one. There's another interesting twist coming...

Thanks!
-Dan


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