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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here for the B v. B review battle! :D

So... For this being only an "attempt" at Jily, it was REALLY DARN AWESOME!!!

I love, love, LOVE all of the wonderful description packed into this one-shot. Your words really pack a powerful punch, and that's a really fabulous thing to have in your writing toolbox. The description was so...angry, almost, and yet, there was love instead.

The phases of the moon were beautiful. You incorporated pieces of the night sky in very well with the tale of James and Lily's little story. And I also really enjoyed how it wasn't like, "Oh, I can't resist you anymore, James! You are so hawt!"

Instead, it was more of a quiet resistance--"No, I don't want to like him, but I do. If only because he's more than he seems to be." Very cool. Very cool, indeed!!

Wonderfulness!! I think that you've definitely been smiled upon by the writing muses, and I'm so glad that I chose to read this story!!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Hello!
ahh thank you so much for this review! It's so great that you liked it! And smiled upon by the writing muses, wow, you've been smiled upon by the really really nice and lovely person muses then! As for the quiet resistance, I always thought that they'd just kind of mellow out their relationship then like it would all happen, and I guess that was what I tried to show here, even if it did kind of all go down in a bed of angst. Again, thank you so so so much! to be honest I'm totally fangirling over this review. Can I even do that? I don't know but it's just SUCH A LOVELY REVIEW IDK. You've totally made my day/week/upcoming future!
Charlie
xxx


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