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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
Lily, so angry and jealous over that girl. Definitely her subconscious telling her to stop listening to her head and be with James. I shall cry until she does... :P

Oooh, why did his neck burn??? I need to know now! Because until I know, I will tell myself he's charmed to only be kissed by Lily. ;)

The memory started off so nice, then went a little sad, then was adorable, yet I am still sad because I know it's going to change for Lily and Petunia. I just want to hug them and be like you'll love each other forever! Don't go away!

Just know that I also get a little teary when I read about Lily's parents - they sound so lovely that I hate that they're dead, I hate it! And I'm afraid of what Sirius and Lily have to tell James. *hugs them all*

I hope one day Lily trusts Belle to tell her about her and her sister. Mostly because I like Belle, partly because I wanna know. :P

"If that was true, and I could kiss whoever I pleased, I would already be kissing you," - Yes. YES!

"But, I won't - DAMN!

James! Why do you hate me? :P He's so sweet and caring and just so good of Lily. He needs to stop it! Okay, no, he doesn't. If he stops, I'll be sad. I can wait. Maybe. I guess we'll see.

Love how Sirius just blames the girl. And then I love that she just agrees! That's just awesome!

Peter! So cool, so awesomely adorable, so Gryffindor (please don't change! ;(). You go, Peter! Tricking Violet and standing up for James! See, this is Peter! Before war and sides and all that - he is a Marauder and I love you for writing this even more! It's sad when authors forget about him! Or show that they hate him because of what happens later.

And it's magic lip gloss! Can I keep my idea? I like that he's hands off. :P

Edgar! The little girl in the one-shot. The family. The brave house elf. The feels!

The Order! I love all the little hints and clues bits of onfo about future events. Well, they may not be hints and clues, but maybe bits of info and it's so awesome to know them!

"Great. I always wanted to hand a bloody bat to a girl who's already looking for an excuse to hit me with something," Sirius mumbled.

"Maybe she can toughen you up, princess," James said with a laugh.

I will never not love their banter! :D

I just want to hug Remus; listening to him planning his evening for his transformation. But he has his friends! It's so sweet!

This chapter was so amazing, Jami!


(Don't be afraid of this rambley, crazy review - it's midnight here and this is an insight into my mind. ;) Also, I was listening to Fresh Prince of Bel Air and Ghostbusters while reading the last bit and reviewing - James is the prince, they're going to go ghost busting and no one can take this away from me... I should sleep...).

Author's Response: Hi Sam ♥

Telling a little side story of Lily and Petunia was a guilty pleasure of mine through the story. You'll see those crop up until we get to the point of when they see each other again for Vernon and Petunia's wedding. I'm super excited you liked that part, because I know flashbacks can be a bit jarring for some people.

HAHAHAH oh my I LOVE your idea about James. We can just pretend he's charmed to only be kissed by Lily, yeah? That sounds good to me!

Peter is someone I NEVER thought I'd end up liking, but I really do. I've twisted so many thing around, so that facts still fit canon, but in my head (and eventually in book two) it's a much different circumstance than Peter just getting scared and betraying them. I just can't handle that. There's too much sad in their world's, and though what Peter did will never be excused, I've found a way to live with it ;). If you end up going along with me until then, I think you'll really love what I have planned for Peter.

I'm so thrilled you liked their banter! I really have fun writing it, but I always wonder if I'm the only one amused by it :P

Thank you so SO much for this amazing review and just making me feel so excited and happy ♥ Us Marauders fan have a special sort of connected &heats;

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