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Review:CharliesRose says:
I'm just laughing here because I realised I did a random little happy dance when I saw you updated this story. I was so excited it's not even normal.
And then of course if I was already doing a happy dance just by seeing a new chapter existed you can imagine how I was when James was told he was back on the England team... Haha basically I'm very very happy (and excited) by this new chapter. And you wrote it to make it sound so believable. It didn't seem cliche at all, and it's so convincingly written I actually have to remind myself it's not real.
And the return of Freddie!! I was excited to see him mentioned too. I was actually excited by a lot of this chapter. But in particular Freddie because he's cool, and Brigid because you write her so well.
As for Pumpkin and Fish... I really don't think they would go together so I think you got that right... and I can't wait to see what happens between James and McClaggen.
Your writing is amazing, keep up the amazing (supermegafoxyawesomehot) work!
~Char

Author's Response: This chapter was actually really hard to write. I expected the chat with Demelza would prove difficult because of its importance, but actually the reaction of James' family was just as hard in the end! But it was a nice chapter to write all the same, because happy things happen to James, and god knows he needs it after the hell I put him through!

Freddie will pop up more as we progress with the World Cup. A fair amount of James/McLaggen interaction to come too. Pumpkin/fish seems to be a thing, at least a couple of recipes do seem to exist! I don't fancy being the one to test them though. Thanks for reviewing :)


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