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Review:alicia and anne says:
I really like seeing all of the family members and finding out just what they're all up to.
Arthur and Molly are pretty awesome aren't they? Volunteering like that.

I love Al and James's rivalry and that fact that Harry knows George and the others are up to something, nothing get's past Auror Potter!

I LOVED LOVED LOVED George's prank in honour of Fred, that was such a great thing for George to do.

Awww Harry! I just want to hug him because he's so sad! *hugs him tightly*

Oh no! An attack on Malfoy Manor! I'm glad that Draco and Astoria managed to get away in time.

That's very clever that the book was hidden like that, very very clever.

What? Oh no! She killed Flint! I probably shouldn't be as sad as I am for that... but now I'm sad, Theo's friend has gone!

Author's Response: Whew! Another fan of the family picnic. I came so very close to cutting this scene way back. At the time, I felt like it made the chapter drag. That was back when really long chapters used to scare me.

That said, the entire family gathering was so much fun to write. I'm the type of person who likes to believe that things turned out really, really well for the Potter/Weasley clan. So giving Arthur and Molly loads of grandchildren and great-grandchildren, having James and Al continue this silly sibling rivalry well into middle age, putting George up to something... it all fits well with what I wanted to happen for these wonderful people after the war.

Poor Harry. He puts on a good face for the world, but he's still struggling in a lot of ways. Much more on this to come...

The attack was another fun scene to write, because I was able to take the wraps of civility off of Draco and let him use a bit of what he had to learn to survive the war.

Poor Theo. His best ally is now dead. He'll just have to cozy up with Gamp and Goyle, instead. Or maybe go find Zabini. ;)

Whee! Responding to reviews is awesome!

-Dan


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