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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey Val!

I am so sorry I haven't read and reviewed this story for so long - I have to admit, I had kind of forgotten how amazing it is. Your writing is pretty superb and actually kind of flawless. I'm very jealous right now!

I love how you are developing your characters without rushing too much. I was kinda loving Camille in this chapter, especially that final line she said in French :) And Jean is kind of adorable! I loved that he lied for Astrid and I thought his argument with Camille was written perfect - it definitely added a layer of tension to the chapter.

Have you ever watched a movie with a 'BOOF' moment? That moment when your eyes widen in horror/disgust/surprise and you clap your hands over your mouth and go "OMG! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!!" In my opinion, this chapter had a HUGE boof moment with that creepy mountain elf (am I allowed to be completely creeped out?) that can take away magic from wizards. That was a really smart idea and I am definitely looking forward to reading about the consequences this elf brings. And I definitely think I dislike the Mininster!

I also think (and I feel like I'm gushing a bit now) that your wrote Johanna's flashback perfectly - that must have been really hard to do, so I'm giving you a big pat on the back! Wow, that sounded cheesy. Pretend I didn't just say that. I guess I could always delete it, but...

Wow, getting off topic, sorry!

Anyway, this was an amazing chapter and I can't wait to read more! Definitely adding to my favourites. And I'm looking forward to the next chapter of the Calendar Girls;)

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi Courtney!

Pah, you, jealous? Your writing has me fangirling all over the place so there's really no reason for you to be.

Oh, I'm so glad you like Jean! I didn't plan on making him likeable at the start, but the more I write him the more I get attached, so it's great to know you like him even when I didn't (I hope I'm making sense).

BOOF MOMENT. Yes, you're allowed to be completely creeped out -- the mountain elf is not a nice creature when Goldberg is the one giving it orders.

Thank you so much for your review, I'm really sorry it took me so long to reply! :)



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