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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Hello again! :) Well it's been a while since you've updated this, but that's quite all right! This was a shorter chapter though so I was kind of disappointed with that, but it resolved the cliffhanger from last chapter somewhat so that helps. :) I think if you were to add some more description into certain places, like when Neville and Draco are in the memory, to set the scene a little more, then it would improve the plot and heighten the tension that much more. Otherwise, great snippet and I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter to see what happens to Hermione and if Neville and Draco can save her in time! xx

Author's Response: Thank you, you always leave the best reviews! Sorry for the huge delay & short chapter, serious health issues unfortunately :(. Thank you for the description idea, I definitely will add some more :) I've been trying to edit as like you said, it's quite short but the site won't let me edit at the moment.. Thank you again for all your kind review & for reading my story, I appreciate it very much!

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