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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
Wow. Ava has quite a voice on her, doesnt she?

I really like your protagonist. I mean, sure, shes abrasive, but shes committed to being so, and I appreciate that in a person.

Frankly, I think Matt seems less pleasant than Louis. I mean, sure, hes obnoxious, but Louis is the one bragging--TO A TOTAL STRANGER--about hooking up with his friend. Dude, not cool. Very believable, but not at all cool. Im surprised she didnt slap him across the face--Id count her well within her rights.

Your writing is *very* good. And your description of the diner is incredible. They amount of detail...I mean, wow. You really brought it to life. You must have worked in the food industry--if not, youre even more of an imaginative genius. It really felt like I was there.
...I kind of want a milkshake now.

Really great work!

Author's Response: Why, yes. Yes, she does.

I like her too :) She's definitely pretty bitter, but at least she knows it.

Hmmm. Interesting. Yeah, it wasn't cool of him to brag like that, but at the same time I felt like it was realistic, you know? That's how guys bond sometimes. Although I wouldn't blame Ava for slapping him, either.

Thank you! Actually my friend's family owns a restaurant, and I help out over there from time to time. So I definitely sympathize with Ava's plight, haha. People in the service industry do not got appreciated enough. too.

Thank you so much! ♥

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