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Review:marauderfan says:
Ok so I just read this whole thing in one sitting even though it's past my bed time and I have work early tomorrow, lol. I adored it. I lovelovelove James and Lily and the way you've portrayed them in this fic. It's so nice to see them in such cute and happy scenes throughout their time at Hogwarts - despite that they snapped at each other in the SWM scene, in general they got on well. It shows that they had a long standing friendship despite the row in SWM. And I love how Lily is constantly trying to best James in card games/gobstones. They are too cute. :D

The only thing I'm wondering now is on this last chapter... shouldn't it be in October? I mean I know this isn't when they actually did the Fidelius charm, but I assume they wouldn't have waited 8 months to do it. And we know that only a week after the charm, Wormtail betrayed them, so I'm a bit confused as to the timeline.

Otherwise, I loved this story (I think I sound like a broken record now)! You've done such a great job with it! I'm really glad to see that it's not completed yet, I want more of this story ;)

Author's Response: haha hope work wasn't too harsh on you!

I'm so glad you loved my characterisations! I absolutely adore James and Lily, so I put a lot of pressure on myself to get them right! :p

In SWM, there's a tiny little hint of a smile on Lily's face and from that tiny little sentence, I promptly decided that they were always friends and that minor row was just a blip in their friendship! :p

I didn't know that they performed the Fidelius Charm then! That completely slipped my mind! I might change it to Dumbeldore warning them to take precautions. Thanks for telling me that! I can't believe I forgot! I haven't read the books in a long time. :'(

Anyway, thank you so much for this absolutely lovely review! I've got three more chapters to go! I've already written chapter 7 and about 2,000 words of chapter 9. :p

Thanks again for this amazing review! ♥

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