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Review:Alysea says:
Im still on the fence about this story. I like your Origional Character, but there are just some small things that bother me. For example, why does she get her own room, and why would they bother enchanting her electronics to work in the castle.
There are also some grammatical errors. You also seem to have made McGonagall absent minded, and I am curious as to why. You have a pretty good start though. Im just kind of a stickler with grammar.

Author's Response: about that, it will be explained in later chapter :) as for Professor McGonagall, I'm aware that she's sort of OOC, I'm not really good at portraying her :( Also for grammatical error, I apologise for that as english isn't my native language. But this story is currently being revised by my beta (I just got a beta reader like two weeks ago), so hopefully it will all be fixed as well as McGonagall matter. Thank you for your review though, I appreciate it :)

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