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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Hey! Finally got around to reading this like I said I would. :) It was overall a really enjoyable chapter. Of course the lost-middle-child-Dom story line with the perfect-sister-Victoire has been done over and over again, but I've not ever seen it tweaked quite like this. I enjoyed the fact that you made Dom stutter. It's not overly often you see a fan fiction main character with such an obvious 'fault'. (Not that there's anything wrong with stuttering, but it's not a characteristic common in the cookie-cutter leading roles!) So kudos to you for taking a dive into that territory. I also strangely liked Teddy's character. Victoire was a complete nightmare. I found myself very curious to know where this story is going next!! I do hope that either Victoire or Teddy can redeem themselves or Dom can fall short of my current impression of her! I love when people aren't as simple or apparent as they first seem.

Looking forward to another chapter!

Author's Response: Hello!

*Fangirls* Hello, thanks for stopping by! I think the idea of Dom being the sort of "odd" middle sister while Victoire being the "perfect" one has been done over a million times in fanfics, I think. But I try to make all the grandchildren a bit different and I really wanted to do something a little unusual with their relationship.
For some reason I have always imagined Dom with the stutter, I can't imagine her any other way, just how I can't imagine my Audrey not having been a stripper. Its just weird like that! I had the idea for this from a mental image of her sitting by Dobby's grave and had to wrap a story around that.
I'll most likely play around with Dom's character and her stutter a bit more in future chapters because I hadn't had time in this one, it was already long enough. T-T
I like to think of Teddy as a carefree jerk and there's something rather likeable about him even if he is annoying. I hope the next chapter goes well, I'm so picky about what I write sometimes...
Anyhoo, Victoire is a nightmare, Dom says so herself but I'll go into more detail with her too later on. I'll try to bring another chapter out pretty soon then and hopefully delve deeper into these characters.
I'm not sure who's going to be the worst person by the end of this though...hehehehe.
Anyway, thanks for stopping by!
Much love,

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