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Review:KiwiOliver says:
I'm back! KO with your RR :)
When I read this chapter the first time (yup, I read it immediately after your first review) all I could think of was my jealousy of you!
Your writing is detailed, consistently brilliant, always has a nice balance of description and action and most of all flows really well!
Your character Astoria feels so real now that I know her intentions and the reason behind them, I'm sat in awe awaiting the next chapter!
You said in your request that you thought there was too much background, and if I had any suggestions on where to break it up a bit.
Now, I read through the background parts several times to try and help you. Unfortunately I feel slightly useless. It's my opinion that not only every single sentence of background information was essential, but that when reading over it, it seems to fit perfectly within the chapter! You had just the right amount to give us enough information without boring us, so don't worry at all! :)
Overall a brilliant chapter, I absolutely love adore your work :)
Hope to see the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review, and for your opinions. It helps so much in gauging what things to consider adjusting and what to let alone. And I am particularly grateful for your taking the time to specifically consider all my areas of concern--I appreciate your thoroughness. Thank you again, very, very much. The next chapter is in the queue!

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