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Review:KiwiOliver says:
Back again! (Hopefully not for the last time) with your RR:
Not too much happened in this chapter, it was more a sort of revealing of truths between the two characters, it's not a bad thing, in fact I liked it a lot. It makes a good change from the fast paced pranking and Quitdditch and love-y dove-y stuff :)
As usual your characters are perfect and the conversation seemed to flow really well :)
I know these last reviews aren't as long as the first, but I don't really like repeating myself. ON THE OTHER HAND:
I must say that I really like the direction you're going with this, your writing style is very good and it flows without need to worry. :)
Hope to see you re-requesting when the next chapters up :)

Author's Response: I actually had debated smashing chapters three and four together at one point but I felt the gypsy tent of awesomeness needed its own chapter..
Usually my conversations are inspired by ones that I have had in real life (though not as dramatic) and added in with the side notes in my head. As soon as I write another chapter I will let you know (once it is actually my turn...)

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