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Review:KiwiOliver says:
KiwiOliver again with your RR:
I liked this chapter quite a lot, there was more development in this one which is always good, you don't want your story to go to a standstill after all!
Overall a really good chapter, I don't want to bore you with the same compliments as the other two :p But a nice idea and good characters :)
The only bit of CC would be, how did they manage to get into the Gryffies common room unnoticed? A line or two explaining how they got in, would be helpful to the reader :)
Good job!
KO

Author's Response: Thanks! I am trying to shy away from the fluff a tad (just a tad don't worry) and develop a plot in this madness. I will remember to add that in once I get caught up a bit after the queue closure..
Thanks!
XOXOXO,
LLG


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