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Review:KiwiOliver says:
Aw what a lovely chapter :)
I love fluff, you can't go wrong when mixing me with fluff. And I should point out that you've done a brilliant job making it fluffy! I loved the thoughts of Eilley and I think you've made her a really believable character! You've done a good thing making her real and not a Gary-Stu that everyone likes and thinks is perfect. I love how she likes Scorpius! Add's some nice drama into the Sco/Rose we've all become so familiar with!
Your story flowed really well, you managed the transition from talking about her friends to her enemys really well.
Though you haven't got an actual plot yet, (as you said in your AN) you've set up a lot of possibilities, her love with Scorp, her battles (and possible future love?) with Al. Lots of mischievous fun that us Slytherins love :)
An overall really good chapter, with some solid ideas.
Hope to see you re-requesting this because I'm intrigued as to where it's going!
KO

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words. I was sick of writing stories with a lot of depth without any results and I figured why not actually have fun writing something? Your opinion means a lot because it is all I have had publicly on this
I won't give up on this!
XOXOX,
LLG


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