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Review:KiwiOliver says:
KiwiOliver with you're RR :)
I think you've done a really good job of taking this character, one we all believe to be selfish and horrible, and showing her off in a different light.
I like the style a lot, it feels like she's actually talking to Tonks, it's not confusing at all in fact, I think the style is what makes this chapter great!
The emotion comes across perfectly, reading it gave me the same sort of sad feeling that she's going though, it made me pity her as a character. That just proves you've written her effectively :)
The character you created (well, wrote) is realistic, along with every part of the chapter. The voice suited her perfectly and I think you did a good job of understanding Cissy's feelings :)
If I were to give any suggestions it would be to just check over for typos (not spelling mistakes just things like putting two commas instead of one). They don't distract from the story at all, but I though I'd try and give some CC instead of just all praise :p (Not that you don't deserve all praise, because you do)
Overall a very beautifully written chapter, I was glued to the page from start to finish. :)
Hope to see more of your work, feel free to request some :)
KO

Author's Response: Hi there! :)

I'm glad you thought this was an original way to see Narcissa, and that she was written alright. And it's wonderful to know that the style complimented the story, and a relief since I worried it might be a little confusing. I'm glad you connected with Narcissa emotionally as well, as I got a little emotional writing the story! :) I never saw Narcissa this way until this story just appeared in my head, but liked giving her some depth and emotion.

I'll definitely go back over the story and check when I get the chance, and I appreciate the CC! :) Thank you for a really lovely review, and for all your wonderful comments. It is very much appreciated! :D


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