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Review:WeasleyTwins says:
Hello Claire! Shelby here for the Gryffindor Review Exchange.

I really enjoyed the first section. I like how you showcased Cara and Danny's naivety and innocence. It was a good glimpse into their friendship and also into Danny's psyche. I can't wait to learn more about them!

I like the explanation about why the Potters and Weasleys stick together. That's so smart and I don't know how I've never thought of it before! To me, it seems like something Molly and Arthur would want - for the family to be close and supportive. And Harry as Head Auror! We know it's true, but it still awes me to read it in print. And Cara was in a coma? Now she's dead? I can't wait to see how you fill in these holes. It's only the first chapter and I'm quite intrigued, especially since your summary is so mysterious.

I'm completely swamped with work, so busy it's ridiculous, but count on finding more reviews from me! I'm interested!

Shelby

Author's Response: I'm glad that you're excited for Cara and Danny! There are plenty more of them coming up, but I won't say any more.

To me, I can never imagine the Potters and Weasleys, at least not in the generation following Harry, Ron and Hermione, to have a lot of outside friends because they can still feel the effects of the war a bit.

Cara's situation will be explained in the later chapters, so sit tight!

Don't worry; I COMPLETELY understand about being busy. Last month, I couldn't review till the end either, so thank you for reading and reviewing! (:

Claire


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