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Review:marauderfan says:
Aw, this was really cute! I never thought that would be a word I'd use to describe anything relating to Dementors, which in my opinion are one of the creepiest, scariest things in the Potterverse, but there you have it. I adore the back story you've given Derwent, and how you can even tell what he was like as a person. It's a neat explanation you've provided for what happens to a person who gets the Dementor's Kiss, too. We never heard anything from Barty Crouch Jr after GoF and I always wondered what happened to him!

I love that you chose something as simple and innocent as gardening to be Derwent's hobby. Cultivating a garden is practically the opposite to Dementors' taking away happiness, which creates a nice parallel. And I love that Derwent is a fan of bad puns. It made him so much more human! And how even Dementors still worry about their children. Poor Derwent. :(

Also, I love that Bellatrix Lestrange's happiest memory is kissing Voldemort's feet LOL.

This was a great read, and very refreshing, it's so original. Nicely done :)

Author's Response: Hi! Glad to see you venturing off the GfS path and checking out this little story of mine! :D

This was such a random idea but I really loved writing it and imagining the character of Derwent and giving Dementors a little life. I made up a lot of what happens to a person after being Kissed, but hoped to show how Derwent retained some of his personality and hopes even in soulless Dementor form. It's a little hopeless, but fun to write, and I liked giving Barty Jr. some closure as well.

I'm glad you liked gardening as being Derwent's main identity, and appreciated the contrast! I know, I feel so bad for Derwent too, but perhaps he still has hope. :) And yes, that doesn't say much about what brings Bellatrix happiness, does it? :P

I'm glad you liked this silly story and thought it was original, that's such lovely praise. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :D


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