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Review:KiwiOliver says:
KiwiOliver here with your RR:
I was trying to think of a good opening line to this review, but all I could think of was: Beautiful
You're portray of Andromeda, of the people around her.
The poetic feel of the chapter, the smooth flow.
Everything's perfect.
I feel guilty leaving such a short review but this story is one of the most well written things I've ever read on this site! I spent a good few minutes trying to find some way in which I could help you or offer you some CC, but you have everything down to a T.
You asked if I felt the story was complete, I think it is. But that doesn't mean you have to stop. It just means if you did, it wouldn't be bad because it's already so amazing.
I liked hearing about Teddy, how she is forced to look after him and how she's saddened at the sight of him.
It's an odd complement but you write depression really well.
Overall, like I said you've written a very beautiful piece and I'm glad I had the chance to read it.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! And such a quick response! :)

Your review isn't short and it really makes me smile, so thanks! I'm not one to argue if you don't feel you have any CC to add here, no worries. It's very reassuring to hear that you think the story is complete and could even be good enough to build on if I ever encountered another batch of Andromeda-flavored inspiration. She's definitely an intriguing character and I loved writing about her here.

Yeah, I imagined that it would be really hard for her to be put in the position of caring for Teddy when he reminded her of her deceased husband, daughter, and son-in-law. I'm sure Andromeda has felt totally alone more often than most other people, poor thing.

Hah, thanks! I'm a clinical psychologist in training, so I try my best to capture the human condition and use the scientific knowledge I have to create interesting stories.

Thanks for this really sweet review!


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