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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Hello, here for our review swap :)

I chose this one because it had fewest reviews and it was a sorry about a minor character which I LOVE!

I really like how well you've captured Susan's feelings after the war. I've read a lot of fics that have acted as though everything is hunky dory and it's just not realistic. This is wonderful though, it makes perfect sense that Susan would want to escape and what better to distract her than dragons?!

Your descriptions are really nice, I particularly loved those of the Ironbelly, the part about its eerie blood red eyes was excellent.

You convey her urgency to help really well, I like how erratic her thoughts are and how you describe each idea she thinks of. Her eventual solution was brilliant and excellently executed.

This was a lovely little one-shot! Thanks for the swap :)

Author's Response: Hi! Wow, it's been forever since I've had feedback on this story, thank you so much!

This was actually a challenge for last year's house cup, and we didn't have much time to write at all! So it was an experiment in speed-writing, which might have contributed to the all-over-the-place feel of it :). I was definitely making it up as I went. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, though, and thank you so much for your comments on the content and description. Description is something I have to work really hard on, so I'm especially glad you liked how this one turned out :)

Thanks again for the lovely review! It was great hearing from you!

--Maggie


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