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Review:BookDinosaur says:
-BookDinosaur- here with your requested review! Sorry it took so long!

So, I enjoyed reading this chapter. I think that you built up the suspense in this chapter pretty well, or that might just be me, since I'm pretty easily scared/made sad. ;)

I think you had a good narrative of what was happening, and your dialogue was good, but I do think you could put in more description, especially towards the end, after Hermione comes out of the towers of junk.

I will admit that the whole barn thing doesn't quite make sense to me, and you haven't explained why Voldemort would want to hide his Horcrux there, but I'm sure you'll explain in the coming chapters. :)

All in all, I really enjoyed reading this chapter, and it left me wanting more, so please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I will revise the chapter to include more descriptions about the Horcrux location and what is happening.

I will also update to explain better why Voldemort had hidden his Horcrux in the barn. I had chosen the barn mainly because it was another location that had been pointed out during the extra lessons with Professor Dumbledore.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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