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Review:marauderfan says:
I just want to say that you are a master at handling a complicated plot line. I think that's your greatest strength as a writer- you're able to seamlessly weave so many details and feelings into a very well thought out plot. There's so much happening, a lot of which is behind the scenes, and you tell it so well. Your descriptions are so evocative. In case I haven't said it enough, this story is really a magnificent piece of writing.

I liked the shattered narration you used here, with the several different POVs at (relatively) the same time. With all the little snapshots into what's happening all over the place, it gave the impression that although people are putting on a brave face, everyone is sort of falling apart a little.

So glad Terry is ok. And I loved that scene from his POV, imagining how Tor would fit in with his family. Aww..

Really great job with this chapter. 28176/10.

Author's Response: Aw, you're so kind! :) I'm glad you think I'm doing a good job of the complicated plot and the multiple backstories, it's one of the best parts of writing a long, drawn-out story like this one! It's lovely to hear you like the descriptions and hints, I'm blushing! :)

Ah, I'm glad you liked the structure and seeing into other points of view, and how other people experience the same hour. I wanted to build up to the reveal of Tor and Terry a little, and yes, show how so many people's identities are fragmenting and their lives falling apart.

I know, I just couldn't hurt Terry! And the scene of his family was one of my favourites, I really liked writing it! :)

Thank you for another wonderful review! :D

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