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Review:marauderfan says:
ACK THAT ENDING YOU HAVE GOT TO STOP DOING THAT. Just kidding I think its a fabulous ending. It's just mean. :p

I love the way you characterised Narcissa in this chapter. She's not as stuck up as she always appeared to Harry. I liked her interactions with Tor and the Nott boys.

Speaking of the Nott boys, I love the details you've added about Theo as a kid, and how he's changed. What an intense chapter. We get to see Theo as a young kid reading fairy tales to his friends, and then Theo as a teenager joining up with the Death Eaters. I mean I figured it was coming, but... agh. Anyway I liked that you chose the chapter where he shows his true colours to also give us some little details about him as a child.

Finally, I meant to mention this in my review for the last chapter but was too busy fangirling about how excellent that chapter was. What is Tor's Patronus? You didn't actually say what it was specifically. Is it a bird? Because it landed on her arm I thought it was a falcon or something, but I'd love to know what it actually was. (Or do we have to wait until a later chapter for that info?)

Ok on to read the next chapter IMMEDIATELY.

Author's Response: I know, don't hate me! :P I'm glad you liked the suspense of the ending, I felt so bad doing that to readers (and to Tor) but it was very fun to imagine.

It's good to know you liked Narcissa, and that she came across as a bit more human. Poor woman is going through so much right now, and it's definitely taking it's toll. I imagined she would be kinder to Yaxley's girls as well.

I'm so glad you liked getting to know Theo a little better, and how being exposed to the DE has affected him. I really want to balance him out as a character, and how some of the circumstances which affect his personality are beyond his control, so I'm glad you liked him. :)

Yeah, I was unclear about it on purpose, but the exact Patronus will definitely be explained in a future chapter. Tor herself isn't an expert on types of birds, and since she saw it so briefly I figured she wouldn't place it exactly.

Thank you for the awesome review! :) (Off to respond to the rest of them now!)


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