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Review:R_Star_ says:
Great start to the story. The plot seems intriguing and new. I wonder how Astoria's mother died?

My favourite sentence was:
"She met his eyes with hers, piercing their cloudy-grey depths with bright, clear blue".

Looking forward to the next chapter,

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I’m so glad you like it. I'™m working on the next chapter right now, and hoping to time it with the arrival of a banner. I really appreciate your taking the time to review.

And you can find out how Astoria’s mother died in chapter two!
...which, admittedly, is an oddly excited way to talk about someone’s death. But, you know, mystery, intrigue, mortal peril...there has to be room for a few exclamation points somewhere in all that.

Thanks again!

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