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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This was another great chapter! It was really interesting to see what Ginny and Hermione are getting up to at Hogwarts; I think your characterisation of Ginny in this chapter was great, especially her last line to Dean. I hope Dean doesn't get in the way of her relationship with Harry!

I think the best scene was with Lucius Malfoy in the Wizengamot courtroom. I would have loved to see more of the trial, and the trials of Draco and Narcissa. I'm satisfied about the fact that Lucius was imprisoned again xD And glad that they let Draco and Narcissa go free because of their help to Harry. I think it would be really great to have gone into more detail in that section, because it was just fascinating.

All in all, really good chapter! :D Good job!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad that you liked it! And I'm thrilled to hear that you thought that it stayed true to Ginny's character, because that's so important for me :)

You're definitely right - this could have focused a lot more on the Malfoy, and I'm so happy that you liked the little glimpse we got of the trial. However, I just didn't think that it fit into this story (a story about the Malfoys fate after the war would definitely be interesting, though. And since I'm already planning a Draco/Astoria story in my head, I might save additional details for that one). But I see your point :)

Thank you! It makes me so happy to hear that you enjoyed this :)

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