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Review:Jchrissy says:
Well. Fine. I guess if you just want to break my heart in a zillion pieces, you go right ahead. Apparently I have no say in the madder considering I currently feel like a pile of mush :(!

Despite my, 'you made me sad you are in trouble!' reaction, this first chapter really is beautiful. You hit on a lot of the most important aspects of Fred and George's relationship. Their bond to one another, the kind of comfort that bond brought, their dependency on each other, the way they were always able to do something together no matter what. and you made George understand that all of that was gone. There was no more together, there was just George. And that's such an insanely sad thing to realize.

I didn't just somehow miss what the ruby actually is meant to do, does it? If I did, well, I've been working since seven so I get a break, right? If not, and you didn't actually tell us yet, I'm excited to find out! I hated how painful it was for George to go back in the shop the same way I hate the idea of him never going back in. You showed his need to move on but the fact that he wasn't sure he was even capable of doing so very clearly. This was a really realistic, though heartbreaking, start.

Hannah's appearance surprised me! At first I was going to be like, Angelina is African American! Girl ain't blonde! hahaha. After the initial surprise I really enjoyed having Hannah there, someone George wouldn't expect to help pick him up off his feet, I'm sure.

The title is insanely fitting, and this is such a lovely start! I'm excited to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hey Jami! *hugs*

I definitely seem to write things with all the feels at the moment haha but thank you! I really wanted to express how much Fred meant to George after a lifetime of being almost one person.

The ruby has more emotional significance than joke significance, so it's important in that sense. And yes, I wanted to use Hannah as more of a friend rather than a romance which it would have been with Angelina!

So glad you liked it lovely, thank you!


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