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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:

I just joined the HPFF forums, and you were the Prefect who sent me my House password. And, well, you were just so nice about it that I thought it would only be polite to drop by and look at your writing.! Am I glad that I did! I am utterly hooked by your premise. I canít wait to see what happens next (if wasnít falling asleep on my keyboard and didnít have a Portuguese exam tomorrow, Iíd be finding out tonight--I can hardly help myself as it is. And, speaking of Portuguese, I love that Domís headed to Rio. What are the odds? No coincidences here--this was fate).

You really know how to write action and description. So rich in detail. Iím loving it. In fact, I got so caught up in the plot and in finding out how Dom and Ignotus could intersect that Iím probably going to want to come back and read it again tomorrow, just to get the full effect and to take in the scenery properly.

Iím extremely impressed by how you took the Tale of the Three Brothers, which really only lasts a few pages in TDH, and brought the people in it to life. I particularly love how, with only a few sentences here and there, you allow Antioch and Cadmus to go from caricatures of foolishness and selfishness to real people with natural gifts and flaws.

Also, Iím just glad that you included Shell Cottage. Itís an underrated location in the fics Iíve read, so Iím glad to see such a charming place once again.

So, just wanted to tell you, so far itís quite...*enchanting* (Oh, puns. I canít resist). I look forward to reading the rest of it, but I figured after all the hard work that youíve obviously put into this first chapter, I should really write a review telling you what a lovely job youíve done.

Thank you for sharing your writing!

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