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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
JENNY!!! OMG, THE FEELS WHEN I SAW THIS CHAPTER!!!

So, I'm going to start with suspicious Roxanne. Not that she's actually acting suspicious, she's probably just annoyed and hating the situation they're in and that's why she's being all grumpy and snappy, but this is a mystery and there's still a traitor in their midsts, so everything everyone does makes me suspicious.

But they're all coming together and are ready to go to the house and fight back, which is brilliant, even though it's all trap-like and such because Abner knows that they're coming. Oooh, the excitement!

AND THEY KNOW IT'S HIM!!! Has Harry figured it out? Or does he at least have suspicions about why Abner would stop going to work? Or is he just too worried about everything? You know, I don't think I've said this yet, but poor Next-Gen's parents. They're just stuck in the middle with no idea why!

GAH! THEO! They have Theo and, hopefully, Hugo and James. Because Theo smiled, he didn't look sad or grim, so I assume that Hugo is still with him and I hope that James has found his way to them.

You may have already said this in a previous chapter, so I think I'll backtrack, but do we know about Fred, the twins and Dom? Since they're suspiciously absent and they were on my 'traitor list' from the beginning, I find this, well, suspicious. :P

Can't wait for the next chapter, Jenny! I'm so excited!!!

Sam.

Author's Response: SAMMY! I LOVE YOU. JUST SAYING. A LOT. OKAY? GOOD. GLAD WE GOT THAT OUT THE WAY.

Roxanne? Yeah, she is very suspicious. Both of your theories are pretty good :D And of course I'm not telling you who the actual traitor is :P
THEY'RE GETTING READY TO FIGHT- yeah! What, did you think I was going to finish without an epic finale? :P

Harry has not yet figured it out, I will tell you that much :P I pity their parents too- I can't write about them though because it makes me really sad :(
THEO AND THEO AND THEO omg yes. All is well, no worries there. Also, I can assure you I am not going to kill off your character :P

Fred and the twins and Dom have all been captured/arrested by the Fraternity/Aurors, and are currently holed up in Yorkshire with Carrow. Meanie pants that he is.

LOVE YOU SAMMY, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW ♥


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