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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hi Zayne, here for the review exchange this month at TGS. I really like this first chapter. It adds just enough mystery to keep me curious to read on. It's clear that she's being initiated as a Death Eater, but we're not given much reason, which is good. Or at least that's how I interpreted this chapter. I hope I read it accurately.

I really want to read the Merchant of Venice since it's one of few of Shakespeare's plays that I haven't read yet. I'll have to read it and compare/contrast it with this story now. I like how you described the masks/disguises, especially since Shakespeare is big on disguising many of his characters. Anyway, great first chapter I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters (though I probably won't be able to until next week since I'm leaving for Portland tomorrow for LeakyCon). I just wanted to review the first chapter before I left. 9/10

Author's Response: Hi thank you so much for stopping by! You did interpret it correctly. I wanted to keep the reason out of it at the moment and explore that in the later chapters. This is just a quick prologue, a flash of her future before we are taken back to the present story.

It's a great play and I'd highly suggest reading it! The story however doesn't have much to do with the play itself other than taking on some of the meaning behind that quote and perhaps a few other connections because of that. Anyway, thank you very much for the review! I'm pleased you enjoyed the first chapter!

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