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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi there, m'dear! I wasn't sure what story you wanted me to return a review with, so I hope you don't mind me selecting this one!

I really love founders era, and this is such a fun start! Rowena as a young girl, trying to avoid marrying simply to marry, seems very fitting for what we know about her. I really liked that it wasn't that she just didn't want to marry, but she didn't want to marry unless the man truly cared for her and she could say the same about him. I think a complete aversion to marriage would have felt off, considering the decade, but the desire to wed only if it's a mutual care fit perfectly!

Aww their so cute as four friends! And I love that they wanted to rescue her. All of them just getting along and hanging out is such a sweet picture, and I was happy Rowena had the chance to escape the party.

Your grammar was great and I didn't spot any typos! I think you put yourself in an interesting situation with Salazar, and wonder if this Muggle girl will play part in why he again begins hating their kind. He installed the chamber specifically to kill them, so could a severe broken heart have played part in that?

Great start! Thanks for an awesome swap!

Jami

Author's Response: Hi Jami! I definitely don't mind at all :)

Thanks, I'm glad you think Rowena's situation seemed realistic. I agree that it would have been weird for her to not want to marry at all. I imagine she would have been pretty sensible about marriage (about all things, really!)

I enjoy writing the Founders as friends who all get on well - before everything fell apart as we know it did. As for Salazar... lips are sealed! ;)

Thanks so much for suggesting a review swap - I loved reading your story, and I loved your thoughtful review for mine!


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