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Review:navyfail says:
They seem to be grouping up again which is fantastic. It is great to see Lily again. And Molly and Lucy too.

What happened with her patronus is very cute. It is because of the memory at the rooftop her patronus is stronger, right?

I like how Rose still thinks with a clear head with the situation in hand. She tries not to let Scorpius or what they can be distract her, which is tough. They are both very sweet and caring of each other.

On thing I noticed:
"I couldn't risk trying to cast Unveiling spell nonverbally- thinking had never been my speciality, and I wouldn't know if the spell Unveiling spell nonverbally- thinking had never been my speciality, and I wouldn't know if the spell had worked." It seems like part of this sentence is repeated. Just thought I would point that out.

All in all, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. Update soon! :D

~Sama

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