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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This was a really heartwrenching chapter :( I feel so sad for Dominique as more revelations about how much her life will change keep coming. I've never thought about the impact on a woman's reproductive system if she becomes a werewolf, and I think it would devastate anybody! I think you wrote her shock and dismay at it all very well, and the build-up of her emotional distress, while her knowing all the time that she must try to put an end to her shock if she is to function.

I liked her scenes with Teddy, the two of them seem really right together. I liked how he seemed a little sad at the news before Dom had been told. I wonder if the two of them would think about adoption or surrugacy (I have no idea how to spell that), if such options are available to magical people. It's certainly interesting.

I'm really curious as to what happens next! Good job, as before :)

Author's Response: Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you could feel for Dominique as that was my aim. I have always wondered how a transformation into a wolf would affect a female and came up with this =) I am pleased you think I wrote her reactions and distress well.

I love writing her and Teddy, and they are perfect in my mine, so I am glad you are liking them. They may just explore those options though perhaps not so soon in the story, and that's not really the main focus, so I haven't decided where I'll go with it, just yet.

Thank you so much for your kind words.


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