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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for your requested review from the forums. Apologies for the delay!

This certainly seems like a very unique and interesting piece of writing. Your plot concept is something I've never come across in fanfiction before, and I like your choice of characters. This first chapter was definitely a great setting for the rest of the story.

Your characterisation of Victoire is quite interesting and I like her portrayal as this beautiful woman who is actually quite dark on the inside. Your descriptions of her beauty, of her thoughts, of what she wants, was all very captivating and I am very interested to see what kind of events unfold further.

As I said before, your descriptions were amazing with great imagery. Certain sentences really stuck out to me, like "they were under her control, under an uncast spell." and "She would wear her golden crown, ruling over everyone with her charm." You really do have a way with words. I can already envision her in the role you've fit her in, so great job.

I don't have any constructive criticism to offer you as this seems pretty much flawless. I am loving your storyline and this chapter has definitely intrigued me to read further so I am favouriting the story and will be tracking updates.

Great start to what seems like a very promising story! Keep writing xD I am so glad you requested and I had the pleasure to read this amazing piece of work. Update soon.

10/10
Cheers
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Oh. Wow. You have no idea how elated I am after reading your review!

I was a bit hesitant about writing on a topic like this, simply because of religious issues and hence the detailed foreword. You have put these feelings to rest and I'm so grateful for that.

Conquest, according to the New Testament is the first horsemen and Victoire seemed perfect for that role. The words seemed to flow rather freely after I envisioned her for that role.

I'm glad that certain lines stuck out to you, you seemed to have pinpointed my favourite ones. ;)

Flawless?! This story? My eyes bulged when I read that line. I don't want to gush, though I could go on for hours, but thank you so much for that.

To sum it up, this review has given my the occasion to jump up and down in my chair with excitement. Thanks once again and I hope that you continue to read the story as it progresses!

~Quix


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