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Review:rich_blonde marauder23 says:
Hello, hello!

First of all, I really love this story!

The characters are very realistic and completely believable. Also, I love how you started the story towards the end of the FWW, I find it gives us a change of perspective and it gives me the feeling that time is running out, since you know what will eventually happen to all the characters.

Second of all, I love Emmeline, I think she is really intriguing and very realistic, and I'm very curious to know what led her to become a Muggle. Also, I really think it's interesting that you chose to make her your main character, since she doesn't die in the First war, but in the Second, so she'll maybe see Sirius again later on in her life when he escaped from Azakaban.

I also really like Marlene! I like how they used to be best friends, but drifted apart after Hogwarts. I hope we'll see more of their relationship developing, because they're really a dynamic duo.

EXCITEMENT.

Oh, Sirius! I think his characterisation is very good and I love the way he looks at Emmeline. I wonder what will happen between them and how long it will take for them to get together (well, I'm hoping they'll get together), because it's very clear that they don't have much time left.

Love the story, and please update soon!

BTW I love your banner. I like how you portrayed Emmeline and Sirius. Who's the man on the banner you used for Sirius? He actually resembles him! And he is so darn hot.

XXX
Sofia

Author's Response: Ah, this is such a wonderful long view! I just keep reading it over and over. And all of the things you've pointed out are the things that I wanted people to notice, which is good. :'D And the guy on the banner is Eoin Macken. He's a hottie.

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