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Review:APerkins says:
Yes! Love/hate relationship done right! Am I a little sick in thinking there was more to be said? I would love to hear more about Rons thoughts on the matter. It would SUCK to be Harry's mate.

I am confused by the line
"As though that's supposed to be a pardon. Take her, Ron. I'll let you have her."

Is that referring to Hermione - Ron can take her? This snapshot doesnt sound like Ron actually thought Harry ever had any say in that matter. Im not sure what the pardon refers to either. Is Ron thinking Harry is saying its a fair trade - Harry will let Ron take Hermione if he can take Ginny?

If that's the case, Id probably get it better if it were clear that Ron thought Harry COULD have taken Hermione at some point, but he doesn't seem to think it.
If that's not the point, then ignore me, cause I've probably jsut missed the entire point or something stupid.

Still loved it, and wished it were slightly longer. :)

Author's Response: I actually would love to write more jealous, embittered Ron! This was for the Every Words Counts challenge, the challenge being to write a story in exactly 500 words, but I honestly did enjoy working on this. It's something to keep in mind for the future. ;)

Ron does feel a bit like Harry could have had Hermione, yes -- and that line sort of comes from my interacting with Potter fans who DID think Hermione would end up with Harry. I never saw that coming, and in this situation, Hermione always loved Ron, but he's insecure about it. He wonders if she settled for him. And it's mostly just paranoia, because Harry was never after Hermione in the first place. Sorry for the confusion, and I hope that made sense and was able to clear it up for you a bit better!

Thank you for taking the time to review this. ♥ It truly does mean a lot, and I really will think about writing more with Ron like this!

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