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Review:patronus_charm says:
This wasnít morbid at all! In fact, I thought it was really great :D

I never really hear much about Harry as a father or as a grandfather so I liked how you included the little titbits about him here as it really added to the story. It made me sad that he never got that much time with his children, but it made sense too, as I can imagine he would be out wanting to save the world. I like the way he almost made up for it by being with his grandchildren and that was really sweet ♥

When he started talking about him being the last one to go it really saddened me. I thought that Ginny had died from the way he had been talking about his children but I didnít guess that the others had too. It was really cool how you linked it in with the Golden Trio as it would make sense that he would be the last one to die as he is the boy who lived.

Another thing I really liked was the way you said that Harry Potter died as a happy man. That linked in really well with the whole Deathly Hallows thing about how the third brother accepted death and welcomed it and as heís a descendent of it worked really well.

Overall, I thought this was a really great one-shot Shaza :D

-Kiana

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