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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
First War Horror - definitely got that right! I had chills by the time it got to Bellatrix and the order on the baby. You write her so well, even from another's perspective, that I think she scares me more than she does in the actual books/movies.

Perspective - it was amazing reading this story from the point of view of a House Elf. That's something pretty new for me and I really enjoyed it. I thought it was a person at first, someone on a side she doesn't want to be on. Finding out its on a side she is forced to be on is so much sadder. But Tully's strength is what I loved most. When I got chills, it was partly because I was scared that as she'd have to obey, it would happen. But she said to stop her, defying her master. It made me smile, then the end made me even more sad.

(I hoped Tully would get away, too, but I admit I kind of expected a sad end, given who her masters are.)

I love James and Sirius. There are just no words to describe my love for the Marauders. Really. To risk their lives to wait for the Order and help protect a child and yet they're making light of a bad situation for a moment and joking about Lily and what he didn't do. It just makes me love them more. I want to hug them. And keep them safe. And make sure a certain date never happens... ;)

I really loved reading this, Jami, chills and all!

Sam.

Author's Response: Hi Sam &heats;! Haha, I wish I could say I was sorry for scaring you with Bella, but we both know I'm not :P!

I wasn't really sure what to do for this challenge that could really show how terrible the war was. I thought first to do something form a child's prospective, because I did want to get something through the eyes of someone too innocent for it all, then I got the idea of a house elf. I'm so happy you liked seeing the story through her eyes, and that you liked her strength &heats;

I know what you mean about the Marauders. They're hard to escape from, aren't they? It's like, once you love them you're hooked. And it's such a one sided affair, because all they do is break our hearts! This is actually part of a scene that will be in book two of BTF, but obviously not from Tully's eyes. Haha!

YES! I am so with you on making sure a certain date never happens. Should we just rip up Voldy's calender, and maybe he won't know?!

♥ Thank you so much for stopping by, Sam! And for an awesome swap!


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