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Review:Jchrissy says:
Wow, you do a really good job writing creepy!

Before I get to that, I have to say how much I love that you keep your stories in the same worlds. That's one of my favorite things that authors do, so if you read more than one of their stories that involve characters who will have a cause to intermingle, then we won't be thrown off guard when Albus is a single quidditch star as opposed to father (or future father, I got too behind on Silver Linings.. I don't know if the baby is born yet!). Anyway, I just really adore that. And it was fun to see Nick make an appearance!

A good ghost story is something I can't say no to. I loved the way the family all pitched in to help, and the fact that Teddy isn't the only one who's getting an eerie feeling about the place. Whether it's just spirits needing to move on, or there's something more sinister at work, I'm not sure yet. But I'm excited to find out!

the descriptions you used with the dust and the dirtiness of the place nearly made ME choke. I don't blame Albus for complaining! But of course he'll just have to stick through it :P. I'm curious if they'll uncover more than just the photo when the builders have to come and start tearing down things in order to rebuilt them. I'm really exited to learn more about the couple in the photo, though!

I loved these first few chapters, Sam, and can't wait to see where this goes!

♥ Jami

Author's Response: Creepy is my middle name. ;)

Yeah, I have a headcanon, so everything is connected somehow, even if it's just the characters. I can't just leave things out now that I've created this whole world, although stories do sometimes require a bit of planning to make sure things don't clash badly. I'm glad you like it. :)

Yay, I love ghost stories, too. I just had to write this when I got the idea. You'll find out who the ghost is and what it wants soon. ;)

Description is like my Everest, but I'm slowly climbing to the top. :P I'd be worried about Albus if he didn't complain. More will come about the photos and maybe the builders will find something. ;)

Thank you so much for leaving a review, Jami!

Sam.


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