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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hey, -BookDinosaur- *finally* here for your requested review! Sorry for the length of time it took!

So I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I really like that it's set in an 'older' time period; I've only read one other story like that on the archives, and I really love what you've made it here. The use of the really formal language was a really nice touch and really accentuated the older time feel.

I love your characterisation of Merissa, she already seems like a really spunky girl. I like how she was eavesdropping on her parents, I think it shows some real spirit. ;D While we're talking about characterisation, I like how you've portrayed Merissa's parents, they're very well written. :)

I also want to see where you're going to go with the whole witch idea. She's in the 18-19th century by the sounds of it, and people then still believed in witchcraft and were likely to burn people at the stake, weren't they? Or maybe I'm thinking of an earlier timeframe.

Anyway, all in all this was a really good chapter that I enjoyed reading.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I really enjoy reading stories that take place in this time frame. So I decided to try to write my own story in the late Victorian era and attempt to make it as realistic as possible. :)

Thank you! I've been trying real hard to keep Merissa from turning into a Mary Sue!

The story takes place in the late 1800s where I think being deemed a wizard or witch would cause you to be an outcast and lose everything. (The burning at the stake is in the Middle Ages).

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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