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Review:Jchrissy says:
Oh you sweet human Sarah, you. No one can write the trio like you. There havenít been a *ton* of Ďjust the three of themí moments in this story, and I forgot how much I loved those.

I donít even know where to start. Okay, here, weíll just do a running review.

the idea of Ron and Harry pushing their desks together and basically turning their office area into a R&H fort is so freaking cute. Complete with their Gryffindor banner, their totally ready to do some bad guy researching there. Itís such a small detail, but those are the ones that make your story so much different.

The Hermione pokes Ron to scoot over and they can officially start a RonHarryHermione moment. Harryís pouty, Ronís trying to make a joke, and Hermione is analyzing. Youíve taken their characters and, in such a small section, made them the exact ones we fell in love with in the HP series. UGH youíre making me so feelsy.

When Hermione told Ron that Harry wanted to apologize and she thinks heís being very hard on himself, and he responds with, Ďthat sounds like Harry.í HAHA. I just want to kiss you. CAN I? PLEASE?

The small bit of introspection when Hermione analyses the difference between Ron and her/Ginny and Harry - the way those two fight fast and make up just as fast, then her and Ron who could make an argument smolder for days, that was another small detail that just made me love this chapter so much. Itís so true to the characters and relationships, and I love how much work you put into making us see these people and their relationships for how they truly are.

Well crap. So my for my running review. I figured I would be able to leave one since Iíve already read this chapter, but I couldnít I got too into it! This is your fault, missy!

I donít think anything could have been better than this appointment with the midwife. It was such a sweet feeling, after everything these two have been through to get to watch them be in such an awesome place together. And I loved Astoria being there and THE CHAPTER ENDED PERFECTLY. It took a dark note there for a while when they were discussing the magic thatís been used against Hermione. I got such a huge pouty face then and just wanted to reach forward and hug them. But then directing us back to a lighter note and ending it with *that* was so perfect, just like you.

Please donít make me wait so long for the next chapter. I might cry.

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