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Review:Cossettely says:
Hello! Let me start by saying that I really enjoyed your story, and I think that you have a good beginning to work with in the future.

I think that you set up a very cute Lily/James situation here. They are both quite in character, and although we get limited descriptions of them in the books and movies, you take what little we do receive and run with it, so to speak.

The only grammar thing that bothers me is very minute, but I tend to be picky. The word "okay" is either written out or abbreviated as "OK" with both letters capitalized. Again, pesky and picky, but necessary.

Other than that, grammar and spelling appears to be pretty good.

I look forward to your next chapter.

- Cossettely

Author's Response: Thanks you! I'm really glad you liked it and thanks so much for taking the time to review! And I will definitely make sure that the "okay"s are fixed in the future! Thanks for the note, that's definitely something I tend to forget about.

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