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Review:MissMdsty says:
That was heart breakingly beautiful Jami! I loved how you made the main character a house elf. The poor things, forced to do stuff against their will. Tully really drew the short straw with being the servant of Bellatrix.

One thing that I really loved is the fact that you managed to incorporate humor into such a dark story. I'm talking about the line Sirius spoke regarding the eulogy.

The part where you described the struggle inside the elf was beautiful. I can't even begin to imagine what it must be like to know you don't want to do something, yet you have to do it anyway.

The end was bittersweet, with the notion that the kind heart of a creature cost her everything. It was a lovely metaphor of the fact that good is not always rewarded as it should and that sometimes, really, life deals you a bad hand and you can't do anything about it.

Author's Response: You seriously spoil me. I feel like I should mail you a cake.

Here James and Sirius are concerned, there has to be some touch of humor, right? This is actually part of book two, will, James and Sirius's part of it. So knowing I'll eventually write it from their eyes is a lot of fun, haha.

Ahh I'm so happy you liked the struggle inside Tully, and I wish it could have ended it happier, but like you said, it was bittersweet. She got her freedom, and that's all she really wanted.

Thank you so much for just giving me way too much sweetness to respond to on this lovely Tuesday morning ♥ you have me grinning ear to ear!

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