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Review:AlexFan says:
Aw, that was actually really cute which is something I'd never thought I'd say when reading something like this.

I remembered seeing this on the humor section and I told myself I was going to read it but I never did. The summay caught my attention because it was the beginning of the story and I thought it was pretty hilarious. I promised myself I would read this but I never did so this is the perfect excuse for me!

I thought that your story flow was very good but the transitions between scenes seemed a little bit sudden to me.

Rose was one sassy girl and I don't know where she got her nature/personality but it sure as heck wasn't Hermione or Ron. Then again, there isn't much said about Rose so you can pretty much write her any way that you want.

I adored Scorpius, I thought he was funny and cute and especially the end where he said Rose wasn't getting away from him. That part just made my heart melt and I was like "awww."

All in all, I think you've got a really nice one-shot here.

Author's Response: Haha, I wonder why! But I'm glad you found it cute :P

It's nice that you somehow got to read it anyway! :P It's quite funny though, that you already wanted to read this, and I happened to want you to :P

I'll work on that in future :) I'll make my scenes more descriptive, so that the transition is smooth.

It's a different take on Rose, I know. But I wanted her to be quite out-there :P

I know I'm the one who wrote him, but I kind of adore Scorpius too :) But then again, I kind of adore him anyway! In almost all the fics I read :P

Thank you so much for this review :) I'm glad this story made your heart melt! It's exactly what I was going for :)


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