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Review:AlexFan says:
I'm so sorry for getting to your review late but hey, it's fit here!

So for some reason the only thing that I can think of talking about at the moment is Noah. Is it weird that I can imagine I Oliver giving his daughter a boy name because he thought it might keep the boys away from her? Am I the onl one who can see that happening?

Anyway, this chapter was by far the best. The reaction that Albus had was a lot more realistic than the other ones but it still could've been more dramatic. His friendship has just most likely been ruined and Albus should be absolutely livid with Ally but instead his reaction is all "oh it's all cool bro, I'll talk to him."

I was like "HELLO! SHE COULD BE THE REASON THAT YOU JUST LOST YOUR BEST FRIEND!"

And Ally is way too calm, cheerful and not at all apologetic sounding for someone who may have destroyed two people's relationship.

The speech that Scorpius gave about loving Rose ended kind of abruptly. He's going on about how much he cares about her and then just stops and goes "night."

Besides a couple of grammar errors there's really nothing else that I can comment on. The only thing that I can say is -and this occurred to me while reading through the chapter- is that it would be a huge plot twist if Cole ended up being the father. Then Ally would have to deal with a giant jerk. Anyway, I'm interested to see who the father really is.

Author's Response: Hey,

It's fine don't worry and thank you once again.

Haha I like you're theory a lot, I think I can see that being plausible as well. Although that's not the reason, the actually reason sounds so un imaginative now, but Oliver thought Noah was going to be a boy from the starts and insisted on the name, even when she turned out to be a girl!

I'm glad you think it's the most realistic so far!

I think Ally is just a fairly calm person like me and one of my friends.

I thought it did was as well but I couldn't be sure whether it was just me or not, so I'm glad it wasn't and you noticed it as well.

Thank you once again for reviewing!!

-Potterfan310
Soph :)


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