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Review:nevilleslonglostbrother says:
Hey... So I have read your whole story and you are clearly a really smart person that knows the whole world of Potter. I have enjoyed the whole thing and was a bit put out when I got to the end. Are there going to be more chapters up any time soon??

Also love how much thought you've put into the house elves, the forgotten heroes of Hogwarts!! Although I too had nightmares about house elves with meat cleavers ;). Hopefully get to read more soon


Author's Response: Had a delay posting for a couple of reasons. I have two beta readers going over chapters 27 and 28, and I hope to get to the end of book 1, 33 chapters, within a very few months. I am guessing we will be posting every other week or so. Of course then there is Broomsticks and Bad Guys, the story about Harry capturing the last of the Death Eaters and Ginny's Quidditch career. And then the story about the Birth of the Potter children, and the final of the 19 year stories, Raising Albus. I have an Albus story that I am working on too.

If you like independent house elves I think you will love the house elf that becomes Hermione's, Harriet Tubman. There is a lot of story about house elves. Freedom is a complex idea, especially if you are a creature that is very social. Humans are not all that different. Really alone people are usually not happy people.

What is the difference between Winky and Dobby? At one point in the outline I have Albus pointing out that Dobby was not "Free/Abandonee" but "Free/voluntarily Harry's house elf" or something like that. I'm still working on the wording. Albus points out that if Dobby was alive he would almost certainly be living at Grimmauld Place with the other Potter/Weasley house elves.


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